Did my best at making that hand up. It's at least at a spot I'm happy with.
I concluded though, that the top half of the dress is quite off. 1 bad measurement must have thrown it. The bottom half looks right, but the more I worked on the top, the more it looked less like her dress. Last thing I want to do is screw up a bride's dress, so that will need to be scrapped and redrawn out.
I'm a little worried I might be going a bit too detailed on the dress, it might be pulling the focus too much from the gaze... We'll see once I get the top half corrected and her arm/hair/veil/face detailed. There's some perspective tricks I could use on the background/floor too, to emphasize focus back into that circle (face > face/hair > arm > hands > face.
Oh - regarding the other hands that gave me trouble, I don't recall mentioning it, but we decided that the arms are pushed out further than they appear, with her forearm close to parallel to her body. That would give just enough angle to have that top bump be her finger tips and their palms facing. It was also decided that his pinkie was too stubby. The scale looked right with where it looked to end, but being so low res, the call was made to extend it about 25%.
I really enjoy how detailed the characters are, and how simple the background is in this version.
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